Storytime
Hey, guys! I got this idea from Josh, or Fyll. www.rainingwater.wordpress.com and basically, I will start a story, and you will join in! Please, no normal comments. If you want to comment, go on another page so we can keep going with the story!!
Here we go!
“There was a boy named Thomas who decided to go for a walk. He went to the edge of a forest, where he was surprised to find a large fox laying on the ground, injured. He was even more surprised, when the fox spoke to him saying, “….. Ok, you’re turn!!!
~Narniapengi
April 1, 2008 at 9:50 pm
“Hey sparky, got a minute?”
April 5, 2008 at 2:26 am
Thomas stared at the fox and transformed using his magentic feet into a hideous…
April 5, 2008 at 8:46 am
puppy-bird! The Puppy-bird gave a great flap of his wings, and shot into the sky! He then turned around back to the fox and said, “
April 5, 2008 at 8:50 am
“Minute up!” and laughed a puppy-bird laugh. Catching a torrent he started to glide into…
April 5, 2008 at 8:54 am
a huge tunnel, after catching the fox in his puppy paws. At first, the fox was frightened, but then he dicided to just enjoy the ride through the tunnel.
April 5, 2008 at 11:42 pm
Suddenly, Thomas the puppy-bird decided to give the fox a bath because he smelt like rotten peaches. So…
April 6, 2008 at 8:48 am
he flew over a cistern, and dropped the fox in. “yikes!” yelled the fox, while dropping through the air. “Not only am I going to hit the water at a great speed, but my leg is still injured! help”
April 6, 2008 at 10:52 am
Luckily it wasn’t a cistern but a wishing well! Immediately on hitting the water, he wished for his leg to fixed, not to smell like rotten peaches, world hunger to end, the end of global warming, world peace, and a chicken in every pot! Climbing out of the well, he found his leg cured but his hair had….
April 6, 2008 at 1:30 pm
turned stylishly green! Then suddenly, the fox struck some Elvis poses, and somewhere a camera flashed while the fox sneered, “Thank you, thank you very much.”
April 6, 2008 at 2:40 pm
A squirrel was cautiously walking toward the fox. “Uh… Fox? You okay?” Embarrassed, the fox said, “Yeah, I’m okay. Hehe.” “Yeah…” The squirrel mumbled. “Anyway, the head fox would like to speak to you.”
The fox ventured toward the cave. What did the leader want? The fox arrived at the cave and…
April 7, 2008 at 10:49 am
saw millions of foxes standing in the cave entrance. The leader fox’s hair was silver-ish, and he looked like a very distinguished fox. He stepped forward, and offered his paw in greeting to Fox. “Your name shall be forever known now as Talcar.”
April 7, 2008 at 4:41 pm
“Talcar?” The fox said, “Why Talcar?” “It was the last great fox before me,” The leader said, very refined. “Oh. Okay.” Talcar said. “You may go now,” The leader said, gesturing his paw to the entrance. Talcar then…
April 7, 2008 at 6:34 pm
walked into the entrance, and gasped!
April 8, 2008 at 1:21 pm
There was a man spearing the foxes throats and putting them into a huge bag he had! Talcar tried to act quickly, but the man almost speared him. Talcar started running deep into the cave. He saw a little shelf up on the wall of the cave, and jumped onto it. He was safe up here. Talcar decided to…
April 8, 2008 at 5:50 pm
change into a knight! His name was now Sir Talcar. As he changed into human form, he noticed in his right hand he had a lance. He now stepped in front of the man who had killed the foxes and said to him, “You there! You’d better-”
April 9, 2008 at 4:40 pm
… stop you heathen . I pray listen . Take leave of this cave . Seize the freedom I give you and live it for those you have shed blood. Go before another dissuades me. The barbarian moved toward the opening of the cave with speed and …
April 9, 2008 at 5:00 pm
BRAVERY!….
April 9, 2008 at 5:42 pm
Uh..and shouted, “Nay, Knight! I will not give up my prized fox pelts so easily!” And with that, the man pulled out of his cloak a small, but sharp dagger.
April 9, 2008 at 6:25 pm
Talcar quickly pulled out his sword and swiped at the man, and missed. Talcar didn’t want to be included in all this foolishness so he ran out of the cave and up a tree. He was a person, but still had the abilities of a fox! The man said…
April 10, 2008 at 5:30 am
“I believe I can fly!” and went to the supermarket and bought a kilogram of apples. He then used the apples as tongs and…
April 10, 2008 at 8:49 am
grabbed Talcar around the waist, and flung him high into the air! Talcar landed on the ground on all fours, like a cat. Suddenly, he was a cat! He turned into one!
April 10, 2008 at 4:06 pm
“Meow.” Talcar said, flipping his paws. He tried to get his sword but he just toppled over at the weight of it.
April 11, 2008 at 3:32 pm
Exhausted from all this fighting, he took the opportunity to take a cat nap. He ran off seeking the first bit of grassy meadow that provided a respite from the all the chaos. He curled up in a ball and went to sleep.
April 11, 2008 at 4:04 pm
After an hour or two, Talcar got up and dusted off his chest with his white paws. He stretched a little, then got up to find food.
April 11, 2008 at 11:35 pm
Suddenly something moved in the shadows. He was so surprised, that, for a few moments, he didn`t move. He had often seen mice before. {He sometimes ate one for breakfast.} But he had never seen mice like the Meadow Mice in all his life, until now. Very softly and very slowly, he moved out, into the moonlight.
April 12, 2008 at 1:27 am
And RAAAAAAAAARRWWWWWWHHHHH a huge evil pair of mutated socks attacked him! The socks had a case of headlice, and started to…
April 12, 2008 at 7:29 am
…chase him! Luckily Thomas had his ray gun to turn them into soot.
April 12, 2008 at 9:22 am
Talcar stared at Thomas for a few moments then darted away. “Wait!” Thomas said, raising his hands up. Talcar had already run off into the meadow at the fright of the ray gun. He stopped, and got low into the grass to hide.
April 12, 2008 at 9:38 am
He was not about to go out in the open where Thomas could blast him with the ray gun! Eventually Thomas went away, and when he was gone, Talcar got up out of the grass. All of a sudden, the grass grew huge, and suddenly, the flowers towered above Talcar. He had shrunk!!
April 12, 2008 at 4:16 pm
Talcar decided to un-shrink, and that happened. He then squashed several helpless cows while on an expedition to the Great Wall of…
April 13, 2008 at 12:57 pm
Cheese. Talcar scampered up the wall and had a little snack on the way. Exhausted from climbing, Talcar curled up and took a nap in one the corners. He woke up to…
April 14, 2008 at 1:37 pm
see Humpty Dumpty! HOWEVER, the egg only got larger and larger, and more and more human as Talcar came within a few yards of it. He saw that it had eyes and a nose and mouth. `It can’t be anybody else!’ he said to himself. `I’m as certain of it, as if his name were written all over his face!’ Talcar stood with his hands ready to catch him, for he was every moment expecting him to fall. The sound of horses was heard in the distance and then……
April 14, 2008 at 1:54 pm
along came Cinderella in her carraige! She lept out of the carraige, and caught Humpty in her arms. After gently setting him down she said, “Oh my, what a beautiful cat! would you like to come live with me?”
April 14, 2008 at 2:04 pm
“Mow?” Talcar meowed, questioningly. Talcar hopped up onto the carriage, and started grooming himself quite gracefully. Cinderella tapped her chin, thinking what she should name him. “Oh!” Cinderella said, throwing up her arms “I’ll call you…”
April 14, 2008 at 5:39 pm
Yellow Belly! It is SO the perfect name for you! Dude, I am so like gonna show you to my friends! Like, they should be so happy!
April 14, 2008 at 7:32 pm
Talcar started squirming and managed to hop out of the carriage. “No! Stop!” Cinderella said. “STOP THE CARRIAGE!” she yelled. Cinderella hopped out and started chasing Talcar. She lifted up her dress a little so she wouldn’t trip over it, and…
April 15, 2008 at 2:04 pm
saw that she had lost here shoe. She immediately got on her cell phone and called Old Mother Hubbard who lived in a shoe.
“Hell-o” she said…. I am missing a shoe! Now what can I do?
April 15, 2008 at 3:43 pm
“Go to the village of Ram, and buy another shoe, young lady!” So Cinderella went hopping on one foot to the village of Ram to buy another shoe. Talcar decided to go along for fun, and happily padded alongside her.Once she reached the village, Cinderella..
April 23, 2008 at 4:21 pm
scurried through the streets looking for the nearest shoemaker. After about an hour of searching, Cinderella found it. She burst through the door saying, “I need a copy of this shoe!” She said, holding her shoe in the shoemaker’s face.
April 23, 2008 at 5:54 pm
The shoemaker scowled, and pulled out a sign that said, “Sorry, closed.”
“As you can see, I was just about to close up. You will have to find another shoemaker!”
“But…” began Cinderella to no avail.
April 27, 2008 at 1:35 pm
oh whoops. I didn’t notice he already did the sorry we’re closed thing. Here’s a different one: (please delete the previous comment)
The shoemaker hurried Cinderella out the door and slammed it shut, grumbling about how crazy people are these days. Cinderella got a little teary-eyed and covered up her face. She sat down on a nearby bench and…
April 27, 2008 at 6:52 pm
began throwing stones at the shoemakers window finding her disappointment turn into fury.
she felt the anger piercing her skull. she saw the shoemaker through the glass glance up nervously from his work table. she picked up a rather sharp large rock and aimed directly at his blotched face.
she…
April 27, 2008 at 7:35 pm
let out a loud shriek when it hit the man’s head. She quickly ran away and hopped in the nearest taxi. “164th street, please!” Cinderella yelled at the driver. He stepped on the gas to reach her destination. As soon as she got there Cinderella…
April 27, 2008 at 9:04 pm
locked all her doors and collapsed on her bed in a daze, racking her brain for excuses for the horrible crime she had committed not 10 minutes before.
she glanced at her cellular phone, and idea forming.
she dialed 3 digits and took a deep breath
meanwhile the shoemaker…
April 28, 2008 at 1:20 pm
ran to the local police, and quickly got a posse ready. Cinderella also called the police, but soon realized that was a bad idea when the police ordered her to stay exactly where she was, and to surrender when they came to her house.
“Oh no!” said Cinderella, and grabbed some things together. “I have to get away!!”
May 3, 2008 at 9:44 am
Cinderella gathered all the things that were necessary and took down her hair and put on a sweatshirt and jeans. She scrambled out the door and called a taxi. She…
May 3, 2008 at 9:18 pm
stood on the street clenching her fists.
she saw a yellow streak in the distance and grabbed her suitcase.
the yellow streak gathered distance and cinderella realized that is was going way to fast too stop in time. NO! she cried out. OVER HERE!!!!
the taxi swerved out of control and accelerated. Cinderella threw herself out into the street. All she could see was two bright headlights and felt and huge impact. she went black before her body even touched the ground.
May 4, 2008 at 12:45 am
Cinderella had been knocked over by the wind. However, the wind wasn’t even blowing. Cinderella just thought she had got knocked over by the wind. But she had got knocked over by the taxi. The taxi driver was German, and muttered some Spanish words to Cinderella and Cinderella ran away to the market. She was bleeding, had 230 broken bones, had fractured her nose and couldn’t walk, but after a while she eventually…
May 4, 2008 at 9:37 am
what? if she had 230 broken bones (which counts a fractured nose cuz a fracture counts as a break) how does she “run away to the market”???
in my last entry i made her unconscious when the taxi hit her.
Narnia: Peace, in these stories, I am afraid that most anything can happen!
Go with the flow and let loose!
May 4, 2008 at 3:13 pm
healed (because she ate some oranges) and was soon well again. Now she sat on the sidewalk, feeling sorry for herself. “I don’t know what to do!! Is there anyone I can trust?”
“My lady, may I be of assistance?” said a thing, bowing low before her.
May 8, 2008 at 9:41 am
“Who are you?” Cinderella asked, squatting down to see what it was. As soon as she got down, the little creature started clawing at her face and all over, blood gushing out. “AAAH NO!!!!” Cinderella shrieked. She tried shooing it away but it kept on clawing at her. The animal soon ran away and Cinderella was just laying in a heap, crying.
June 15, 2008 at 5:43 pm
And then Cinderella realized that she did not even ask the thing its name…”THING!!!” she cried. “WHAT IS YOUR NAME?!?!???!!!!?” A ways off in the distance she heard a sound. A small sound, but not small enough so that she couldn’t understand it. It said “I am your conscience. Fare thee well, young maiden!!” The conscience thingy did not know that Cinderella was in fact an old ancient 2,089 year old granny who had been buried above the fountain of youth, which 2,000 years later had come up in the ground and splashed her, thus making her young and attractive once again. Er…not so attractive, tho. She fell asleep, and dreamed about…
June 28, 2008 at 2:11 am
A yellow polka dotted bunny dancing over the feilds. They lughed and laughed skipping merrily. Then she saw something in the distance. A mans head! She quitly went over to it. There was her Fionce Bob. “OH BOB!”
“Who the heck are you?”
Tears sprung to her eyes ans she ran back over the feilds. She woke up to the sound of…
June 28, 2008 at 9:59 am
washing machines. Where am I? Cinderella thought. She looked around and saw she was in a laundromat. “What am I doing here?” Cinderella said aloud. She smoothed out her skirt and walked out. She walked down the sidewalk and saw…
June 28, 2008 at 12:05 pm
haha i remember this! i see we are still on cinderella.
well continue i guess
July 1, 2008 at 5:55 pm
I created Cindy. LOL
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. . . the Pied Piper of Hamlin and The Brothers Grimm.
July 1, 2008 at 9:32 pm
She said “arg! rats!” thensaw the brothers grimm and was more disgusted she then ran into the evil land of… Disneyworld! she then…
July 2, 2008 at 7:23 am
Went right up to the Disney cp guys and told them what she thought of them which was….
July 2, 2008 at 10:38 am
that she was their biggest fan! in fact…she wanted a Disney CP job of her own so she help continue angering the restless penguin veterans. the Disney CP Administrator took 1 look at her and said…….
July 3, 2008 at 7:55 am
…you need a makeover. So sent her to wardrobe, hair and makeup and she…
July 3, 2008 at 11:13 am
got a totally new rad makeover. Her hair was now a bouncy short blonde, her clothes all red, and her shoes size fourteen.
July 8, 2008 at 7:54 pm
“Oops!” she said, just a moment too late. The scissors had sliced of a huge lock of her curly blond hair by accident. She shrugged. “It looks better like this, anyways.” she said, walking away from the seat that she was sitting at. The CP guys said that she looked PERFECT for the job! Smiling, she walked around the corner of Darkness Street, and she saw…
July 8, 2008 at 8:40 pm
…Micky Mouse….
July 8, 2008 at 9:27 pm
who quickly lunged at her before she could think to scream, and sliced her head off with a sword he borrowed from his close friend, Captain Hook.
And that was the end of Cinderella.
…Meanwhile…
July 8, 2008 at 9:29 pm
A brave little character named Milo popped into the screen. “Is this my cue?”
“Uh yeah…you’re on.” Responds the director, and Milo puffs out his chest, and steps in front of the camera. But suddenly, he saw someone in the distance..
July 23, 2008 at 11:52 am
…it looked just like Fanny Overkind. Fanny was too kind . She thought she could not do enough, although being stingy, is a bad thing of any one, still being a good natured fool she thought worse. Milo had met Fanny long ago when he was …
August 2, 2008 at 1:58 am
Climing a Palm Tree in Figi he had fallen and Fanny had caught her and from then on they had been the best of friends. They’d gone snorkeling together they’d gone cannoying together and eaten talked over dinner. *Steps back into reality* Milo had forgotten all his lines. “Ummm… Ur..” he kept reapeting. “Umm….Urm..” *Thinks to himself* Think Milo think! you’re a famous actor! You KNOW your lines!!! “Milo!!!!! HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN YOUR LINES!?” Screamed the Director angrily. Milo turned white {which was pretty had considering he was black with blue stripes} and his knees started shaking. He wanted to scream but his mouth had gone dry. He watned to run but his shoes felt like concreat. Finally he got enough courage to say…
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Sorry I wrote a rather long one!
August 7, 2008 at 4:23 am
thyx 4 putting me on your blogroll